hmm...
I think the artists opinion of their work is the most accurate judgment of it's worth. Or at least in negative terms... If the artist doesn't believe it'll be successful, but still put's it up, it's kind of a sign the artists didn't really care...
At the very least, it's best not to mention what you think others will think of it, it will affect their opinion.
As for the song,
definitely too much distortion on the start. I'm not one to talk, but the first few bars sets the pace for the song, and I found it so 'crackly' I couldn't tell what was going on.
I've been told I give good advice, but I can never follow it myself... ~_~
Hope I helped somewhat...
+*. Special Ed .*+